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Sue Spitulnik

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Recognize the Parallel

A girl in her late teens screams at her mother, “You mean I have to be in this cast for three months.”

“Who wrecked the car? Deal with it.”

“Is my car all right? I don’t remember.”

“No. It’s going to take months to get the parts to fix it.”

***

Two months later, the girl pouts. “This recovery is getting to me. I don’t know if I can do it.”

Her mother is sympathetic. “I know, honey. It’s wearing on me too. But I promise, on the other side, there is much catching up to look forward to.”

Written in response to Charli Mills January 9, 2024, prompt at Carrot Ranch Literary: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a recovery story. What instigated the recovery? What is being recovered? Data, athletes, illness — expand the idea of recovery and find your story. Go where the prompt leads!

The Brothers Understand

Michael and Tessa moved with the line snaking toward the cruise ship. The slow pace was difficult for Michael, yet he smiled at every set of eyes that met his. When an older man came opposite them in the cue, he said, “Welcome home, brother.”

Tessa burst into tears watching Michael and his brother-for-life shake hands, and exchange understanding nods. The man’s companion touched Tessa’s arm and handed her a tissue. “It hurts my soul that our servicemen wait to hear that from their brothers. I admire your man for sharing his legs.”

Tessa mumbled, “Me too. Thank you.”

November 7, 2023, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about waiting. Where does this waiting take place? Does it have a past or a future outcome? Who is waiting and why? Go where the prompt leads!

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