The funeral home parking lot was full of cars which hid the numerous motorcycles stashed in the back corner, but their large American flags flapping in the wind gave them away. I had to go look; The Patriot Guard was in presence. To enter the building I had to pass between the colonnade of men, standing at attention, on duty protecting a fellow veteran, a fellow biker and a friend. The haunted look in their eyes wasn’t for the current grief, it was from a long ago senseless war. I know, they were my friends too. Damn Viet Nam.
In response to Charli Mills January 17, 2019, prompt at Carrot Ranch Literary: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that includes colonnades. It can be natural, architectural, or a metaphor. Take a stroll and go where the prompt leads.
01/22/2019 at 06:46
I don’t always get a chance to read your flash-fiction, but I always realize how difficult it must be to meet their requirement and I appreciate it. Nice piece.
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01/23/2019 at 09:10
Thanks Rick. The word constraint makes it a fun challenge for me.
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01/27/2019 at 12:08
A sad and poignant piece, Susan.
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