We called the seaside motel to book a room.
They said we’re closed for a private function.
Yes, we said, the funeral of the owner.
You know that? You may have a free room.
In a local diner dressed in our best we were asked,
Are you here for Dick’s funeral?
Our friend was very well liked.
His companies employed half the town.
A church so full, people stood.
Back at the motel well after dark.
The sea mist rose.
The fog horn sounded.
We knew Dick was still with us.
The horn will always be his loving voice.
Written in response to Charli Mills January 31, 2019, prompt at Carrot Ranch Literary: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about sea mist. How does it create an environment for a story? It can set the stage or take the stage. Go where the prompt leads.
02/04/2019 at 10:34
It’s funny the things that keep people in our memories when they are no longer with us.
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02/04/2019 at 19:56
Well done, Sue. I don’t think I have the patience to do that 99 word exercise.
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02/04/2019 at 21:12
I had to learn I could write “short,” now I love it.
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02/05/2019 at 19:18
Nice job, Susan!
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02/09/2019 at 07:21
This is a lovely and unique approach to the challenge, Susan.
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