After the Veterans’ Day luncheon at the No Thanks, the Band of Brothers found their favorite places, behind their instruments. They played different genres of patriotic songs while the crowd sang along. Little Emma was dancing by herself until she noticed a register near the end of the bar. She soon figured out she could make it squeak by stepping on a specific corner. Just about the time Lexi was going to make her stop Michael grinned and pointed to the toddler then changed the words in the song. “Listen, my granddaughter is squeaking in time to the music.”
Written in response to Charli Mills’ November 7, 2022, prompt at Carrot Ranch Literary: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story that includes something squeaky. What is squeaky and why? How does it move the story or disrupt a character? Listen, write, and go where the prompt leads!
11/17/2022 at 13:48
I could really see this Sue, the little girl delighted in her squeaky discovery. I like what she does for the No Name!
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11/17/2022 at 13:49
Oops. No Thanks. (Must have had a different bar in my memory bank)
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11/21/2022 at 16:21
Thanks. This scene was based on a BOTS. When I read it to Bob he grinned in recognition.
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11/18/2022 at 00:17
This is very nice, Susan.
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